First of all, the Zhou was divided into two. Eastern and Western Zhou. The Western Zhou was built on the banks of the Wei River, so it would make trade easy. The Wei River flows into the Yellow River. The city was a perfect square, three miles on each side. The size of the city made it easier for one person to rule. The landscape was divided into nine regions. Each family got a square of farm land for themselves. They used fertilizer so they could reuse the fields over and over again. The Eastern Zhou included a spring and autumn period and the Warring States period. The Eastern Zhou capital was Luoyang. Twenty-fiver emperors reigned during the Eastern period. The Eastern Zhou period was full of change. The Eastern and Western Zhou were two different things but were still both apart of the Zhou Dynasty.
This is all good information. I'd focus on sentence construction, especially the beginnings of the sentences. I'd also like to see a little more information about the Eastern Zhou, and how they were different from the Western Zhou.
ReplyDeleteYour geographical features post still needs revision. The new info needs to be more purposefully woven in. It sounds like you just stuck in a couple of sentences. I'm also still finding mechanical errors. Take a few minutes and go over all your posts SUPER carefully, or have someone else read it for errors. It's so hard to find one's own errors sometimes. You're almost there.
ReplyDeletethanks for the info.! it helped me.
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